Thursday 28 March 2013


We have been learning about shape poems.  
Here is Teleisia's shape poem about volcanoes.
Bang!
Suddenly
As hot as the sun
Rushing lava quickly rises
The ground is rumbling, shaking
Red and orange lava threatens to overspill
Suddenly a red fury rises inside him, screaming
The volcano stands isolated and calm, but not for long


3 comments:

  1. Telesia I love this poem...I can just imagine the volcano exploding!

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  2. telesia your poem is so cool I love the shape and colour

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  3. That is a veary cute poem

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